Comments on: Looking big, crushing cars

By: Used cars

Used cars — Mon, 20 Jun 2011 11:02:07 +0000

This is really good. Thanks for sharing your feelings

By: dadshouse

dadshouse — Tue, 22 Apr 2008 20:22:09 +0000

You’ve just enabled kids all over to google your essay and turn it in as their own. (D+ not withstanding) Maybe you should charge a nickel a view…

It does sound like a fun book, btw.

By: Bill (not Jill)

Bill (not Jill) — Tue, 22 Apr 2008 18:38:13 +0000

There’s Mom!

Yeah, I think he crushed peoples’ cars, or something.

This may have had a 100-word requirement - it’s 99 words, if you count my name. Also, I allude to stating 6 important facts that I learned from the book, then proceed to list only 5.

If only I had turned it in ‘2 da’ earlier…

By: td

td — Tue, 22 Apr 2008 18:17:38 +0000

JBean…yeah those 3rd grade stories are kinda painful…
I wrote a story about 2 mice that were in a shouting argument about who was right & wrong (damned catholic education)….I was made to read the “story” in front of the class. Well these 2 mice first woke thier entire street, then their entire city, then the whole country (because they were sooooo loud of course)….let me tell you…those 3rd graders were in absolute stiches. I was a HIT!! I really thought I had something going. The teacher actually hung my “story” on the wall for future classes to read. Ahh to reach your peak in 3rd grade!! In fact my impersonation of Curly from the 3 stooges at the end brought the house down….:-P

By: Jill(not Bill)

Jill(not Bill) — Tue, 22 Apr 2008 17:56:15 +0000

TD! I did the exact same thing with a ‘very’ string when I was in third grade too! We had to answer the questions at the end of the story and then read our answers out loud in front of our reading group. The teacher totally called bullshit and shamed me in front of my fellow ‘Red Robins.’ *hanging head* It still makes me squirm to think of it.